The Official Writing Challenge
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Beautifully written, telling an equally beautifully tale. I truly enjoyed reading this and the pictures that flashed through my mind from the words you so skillfully used.
08/02/12
Great title, which you brought to life so descriptively that I could almost smell it all.
Excellent story woven through a totally believeable character.
08/03/12
Nicely done...wonderful story with descriptive dialogue and imagery. So good! Thanks. God Bless~
Wonderful story! I enjoyed it, beginning to end!
Congratulations for ranking 17 overall!