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Previous Challenge Entry (Level 3 – Advanced)
Topic: Fragrance (10/24/05)

TITLE: Essence
By Donnah Cole
10/30/05


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The fragrant cloud of smoke lifts from the golden altar as He breathes. It only knows to cherish His presence, this euphony of sweet-smelling aroma.

Impeccable is its character, absent of pride and apathy and narcissism. It represents His expectations for humanity - humble supplication from the sons and daughters of His Holy Inception.

No triviality.

No vain repetitions.

Only pure, unadulterated, unbroken communion set before Him as a perpetual incense.

He breathes deeper.

It blends with a recital of adoration which fills His temple as cherubs exalt harmonious sonnets. They encompass Him and cease not with their reverence.

Prostrate at His feet dwell multitudes of redeemed souls extolling their Faithful High Priest. King David, Elijah, Mary, Esther, Noah...A kaleidoscope of kindred souls concealed from mortal man's witness...all enamored with Perfection.

El Elyon lavishes the sanctified with His unmeditated approval, and with a synchronous movement He whispers forth promises carried on the tails of time to the redeemed travelers of the foreign land. Nomadic souls, weary and persecuted, stretched prone before their Commitment

...fervent for Him

...faithful to Him

...sacrificing for Him

...surrendered to Him.

He senses their devotion - entreaties passing through the fire of the Lamb's sacrifice, perfected by His blood. A sweet incense rising.



Based on Psalm 141:1-2


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Jan Ackerson 11/02/05
Lovely and almost poetic.
Shannon Redmon11/02/05
Poetic indeed this picture of heaven.