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08/03/12
Great job brining the topic to life with scriptures. Lovely devotional. So well written. Thank you.

God bless~
The word "professional" came to me as I read your article. Nothing sloppy here or out of joint. You're so hired. :)
This is a fascinating devotion. I've never heard of umami but your descriptions opened my eyes. This is something I need to work on. There was a time in my life wheen I read the Bible first thing in the morning and last thing at night. Somehow, I managed to slip away from it. Your devot5ion reminds me that reading stories on FW and ministering to those in my church isn't the same as devouring God's word. Nice job.
08/06/12
Wonderful! The introduction laid the perfect foundation for talking about the need for God's word in our lives. Your thoughts were balanced and well presented while also deep hitting and moving. This was an excellent piece of writing!
08/07/12
What a lovely devotional. You did a great job of touching my heart and keeping on topic. God bless!
08/09/12
I had never heard of umami either, but I appreciate how you gave us the information and quickly left behind any tendency to wallow in your own brilliance. Instead you moved straight into a challenge to take in the scripture as the source of wisdom and clarity. Well done.