The Official Writing Challenge
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08/02/12
Aside from the great message flavored into this, I had so many wonderful memories of our state fair - with all the descriptions including the aromas and activity (including the livestock) : )
08/02/12
Very pictorial lead up to your challenge at the close - but shouldn't your title have "or" in place of "of?" However it's easy to be critical for those of us who never make a misteak ;-)
08/03/12
So good. I was so hungry after reading this piece. Well written and enticing entry. Loved how Jesus was a vital part of the message in this tale. Thank you.

God bless~
08/05/12
Liked the description of the dogs joining in the fun at the birthday celebration and of the sheep that thought he was a dog, too! :)

Good message!
08/07/12
This is a wonderful devotion, tied in so well with description and memory.