The Official Writing Challenge
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08/03/12
I loved this well thought out and smooth flowing poem that is prolific in its message. Thank you!

God Bless~
I enjoyed this and impressed how you could tell such a story in so few words, not to mention with rhyme and rhythm. I like the twist on the topic too. It's outside the box for sure.
08/04/12
Very succinct and descriptive - and all in rhyme as well! I'm only guessing that "over the hood" carries some sense of reaching out, but that may be simply a case of being a sheltered Aussie. Well done
08/06/12
Well crafted. I liked that you were actually able to convey a story (Jim's) in such a short space. Good job.
08/07/12
Lovely poems with great truths. God bless!
08/12/12
I enjoyed this poem. It flows well and it is a good reminder to all of us not to give up on those who seem as if they can't be redeemed from the life they chosen but with God all things are possible! This poem conveys that very well.
08/12/12
I enjoyed this poem. It flows well and it is a good reminder to all of us not to give up on those who seem as if they can't be redeemed from the life they chosen but with God all things are possible! This poem conveys that very well.
08/12/12
I enjoyed this poem. It flows well and it is a good reminder to all of us not to give up on those who seem as if they can't be redeemed from the life they chosen but with God all things are possible! This poem conveys that very well.
08/12/12
I enjoyed this poem. It flows well and it is a good reminder to all of us not to give up on those who seem as if they can't be redeemed from the life they chosen but with God all things are possible! This poem conveys that very well.
08/12/12
I enjoyed this poem. It flows well and it is a good reminder to all of us not to give up on those who seem as if they can't be redeemed from the life they chosen but with God all things are possible! This poem conveys that very well.