The Official Writing Challenge
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07/26/12
Simple and interesting. The sentence tags get in the way of the story and interrupt the thoughts of the reader. A little goes a long way.
Like the ending humor.
07/26/12
Very ingenious entry. I enjoyed the style of writing too! Very unusual and made it easy to follow along. Thanks. God bless
07/27/12
I am assuming this is based on a true story. I enjoyed it beginning to end! Very interesting! Sometimes we forget the risks and sacrifices others make to spread the gospel. What a special pot-luck that was. Loved the naming of the pigs…cute. This was a blessing to read.
07/29/12
You have embraced a mix of joy and pain so succinctly. I am curious about your title choice, for you have not clearly explained it, and there could be some contradiction between him and a good man like John the Baptist suffering the same fate.
Congratulations. This was a fascinating tale to read.
08/02/12
I enjoyed your story, the humor and the solemn parts. Congrats on your highly commended award and your editor's choice award.
08/02/12
Congrats! God Bless~