The Official Writing Challenge
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This is a delightful story. I loved the symbolism of Old Man Trouble. How true that a little girl shall lead them. You packed a lot of detail into only 750 words and I'm impressed. It is a delightful story.
07/26/12
This was very creative. I'm glad Trouble didn't win!
07/26/12
Oh I really liked this. I loved the ending. It had me from the first line to the last. Thank you.

God bless~
07/29/12
Now how did Thelma know Freeda was peeking at recipes when she should have had her eyes shut like the virtuous Christian lady she was trying to be???
How approapriate to close with an example of Isaiah's prophecy being fulfilled - that a little child should lead them. (Is 11:6)
07/30/12
Oh my! How true at some church potlucks where people start bickering and fussing. Good job with the ending. Loved that little Hannah brought peace with her singing of Amazing Grace. God bless!
08/01/12
Such a wonderful and heart warmimg story. You did a great job taking us on a ride through a church setting I'm (unfortunately) too many of us know well. I too was moved and even charmed by the little girl being the vehicle by which the adult stopped acting like children. So many lessons here ... well done!
Congratulations for ranking 7th in level three!