The Official Writing Challenge
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11/02/05
This is very well-written and moody, and obviously the middle of the story! I want the rest! More, more!

One little thing: in the 5th paragraph, the 2nd person ("your presence") is out of place.
I can't belive it ended! I want more, too! LOL Good job.
11/04/05
Yeah. It kinda has a feeling of leaving you hanging... not a definate end...