The Official Writing Challenge
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07/19/12
What warm memories you have of your Grandmamma! You really "brought her to life" for me with your loving description of her.
This is such a lovely story. I enjoyed the exploits of the boys. What kid doesn't love to get the dirt on their parents? I think I was struck the most at the end as the MC looked about her huge, appliance filled kitchen, with every imaginable time-saving tool only to notice while we were so busy set on saving time, that time rushed past us and now the kitchen stands empty and cold. Wow what a powerful revelation.
07/21/12
Awwwww. Wow - what a beautifully poignant piece and loving tribute to your grandmother. It reached deep inside to my heart. I loved it, and the last line said it all. Thank you.

God bless~
Congratulations for ranking 10 in Masters and 15 overall!