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Previous Challenge Entry (Level 3 – Advanced)
Topic: In The Kitchen - deadline 7-19-12 @ 9:59 AM NY Time (07/12/12)

TITLE: Tasty Treat Room
By Ruth Neilson
07/18/12


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Sniff, sniff.

Wait, I smell something.

What are you doing in there? My tail is telling me it must be something good. I couldn't stop that thing back there even if I wanted to. That's the Tasty Treat Room which where all that yummy smells and tasty treats magically come from. It always comes after clanking and clanging of those heavy objects. Sometimes you scrape the half ball things and get the yummy, yummy treats into another half ball and then put in the hot box.

That's when stuff starts smelling really interesting. I dunno how you can ignore the cacophony of smells coming from that room.

I have to sit in front of the hot box, sniff the air, and watch that box.

Waiting.

Oh, the torment of the wait!

But, even after you put on your funny paw protector things and pull the half ball out of the hot box, I still can't try that yummy goodness.

Sniff sniff.

PWEASE! Just one little bitty bite and I'll leave ya alone. It just smells so good. Wait, even a better idea.

Just drop a piece for me. C'mon, be a good human and drop it...

Good human!

My tail and I are both very happy. I lick my chops as I watch you humans clean up. Now is a good time to sleep and play. Well, at least until the hot box and Tasty Treat Room gets used again.


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Nancy Bucca07/19/12
Aw! This is so adorable with the dog waiting for a treat. I was really getting into it; too bad it had to end so soon.
Myrna Noyes07/21/12
Ha-ha! Very cute story! Loved hot pads being called "paw protectors"! There were a couple things careful proofreading would have caught, but I enjoyed the dog's descriptions of things! "Good human"!! :D
CD (Camille) Swanson 07/21/12
Being an animal advocate and lover...I truly enjoyed this delightful and charming little entry. Thank you!

Good Human...good story!

God bless~
Shann Hall-LochmannVanBennekom 07/22/12
I so enjoyed this POV. I think you spoke well for both my dogs and cats. Though my animals often go a step farther and deliberately try to trip me so I spill a lot on the floor. This was such a fun and original take on the topic. I really enjoyed it!