The Official Writing Challenge
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Awww. This was an interesting and touching story. Nicely done. I enjoyed it. God bless~
I really enjoyed this story. It took me a bit to get into the rhythm of the language but once I did I was captivated by the charming MC. The message about not letting anger build up is a great one.
I enjoyed this and the accent and language used. Thanks for the notes at the bottom - that helped. But what is 'gumbo'? (I'm a foreigner)Great message too.
This was such a wonderful tale. I agree that the MC had a special charm about her that made her endearing. Such a wonderful piece of writing to be able to communicate clearly even with the accent you chose to write with. Great work!
Ther is a great lesson here, and lots of wonderful details about Cajun lifestyle. I enjoyed this.
Ah, what a sweet story with a deep truth in its delightful telling. Good job and good writing! God bless!
Congratulations on your 3rd place ribbon - Great job!
Congratulations on your HC. this is a great article, and well deserving.
Very atmospheric and absorbing writing. I guess your spell-checker was working overtime as your work progressed, but you have painted some great profiles of the setting and the emotions of your MC. Congratulations on your placing.
Congrats! God Bless~