The Official Writing Challenge
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Wow...That was packed with endless truisms. Short, and packed a powerful jolt.

Thanks. God Bless~
How true! Creative way to share advice.
Wow you spoke so much in such few words. The ending really took me by surprise and grabbed at my heart.
A touching piece of writing with a good message. Well done. I would prefer is as just ordinary prose though as I don't think the line breaks add any value - just my personal opinion though.
I like this very much. What a touching point you make! Good job.
This really spoke volumes in such a short and tightly constructed piece. The ending really wrapped up so much emotion about the distance created and how in little things, big things can happen. So well done. Awesome job!
Wow! This just grabs you! Very touching and had an impact with so few words. God bless!
Congratulations for placing 9th in level three!