The Official Writing Challenge
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10/31/05
Oh, I know exactly what that fragrance smells like! I think this would have flowed a little better if "she" had a name, and if the tenses were consistent. But you made me feel very affectionate toward this lady, and for that I thank you!
10/31/05
What a perfect picture! and preen like birds at a bath
11/01/05
I loved the character sketch of the woman.
11/02/05
I kind of like the style you used.. 'she 'could be any woman that we all know in our church..one of the older women who we count on to be the prayer warrior. Very nicely done.
Excellent descriptions.