The Official Writing Challenge
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07/13/12
This was such a clever use of topic, and so well written. Thank you. I enjoyed it. God bless~
I love this story. I have a death phobia and have prayed to have a peek at heaven to help me through the difficult times. Thanks for this delightful peek into what will surely be just as magnificent as you described.
07/17/12
Cleverly done with beautifully descriptive prose. So real, isn't it? When one has had hard times, one may only see the potential for more harm instead of the joy that awaits. Super job!
07/19/12
Congratulations! God bless~
07/19/12
So beautifully imaginative and symbolic. I love this one. Congratulations:)
07/19/12
Your beginning kind of made me think of Bunyan's "Pilgrim's Progress," and other parts held a hint of C.S. Lewis! You have a great imagination! :) Congratulations on your 3rd place E.C. win!
07/20/12
I had to read this twice to soak up all that this piece was delivering. What a great message you conveyed in this imaginative winning entry. Congrats on taking 3rd place with this.
I had to read it twice to understand it too. But got so much out of it. A clever piece. I will think of communion now as a sample picnic in heaven's gardens. Thanks for the enjoyment!
07/26/12
Congrats! God Bless~