The Official Writing Challenge
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07/13/12
Hahahahahahaha.Simply delightful and fun read. Loved the ending! Great stuff. God Bless~
Oh what a delightful tale. you had me laughing out loud so many times. I loved the vision you painted about the attack duck. It was also nice to get a peek into the other sex's mind. This is a winner in my book! Loved it.
You have a clever endinbg to this delightful romp in the park.
07/16/12
Oh! The poor, poor guy:) Funny, funny story!
07/16/12
Oh, this is excellent!! Very funny and well-written! I enjoyed the "inside scoop" on his thoughts, and I loved the ending! :D
07/17/12
Abbsolutely hilarious! A bit of a message to the ladies here, too... we don't always know what hubbie is thinking. The ending is perfect.
Congratulations in ranking 20th overall!