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Previous Challenge Entry (Level 3 – Advanced)
Topic: PICNIC - deadline 7-12-12 @ 9:59 AM NY Time (07/05/12)

TITLE: Breaking Bread
By Ruth Neilson
07/11/12


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In the fertile Valley of Shalom
We sit, talking about the day's trials,
Spending sacred time together
In the secret place hidden in your soul

Tuning everything out,
Two lovers rendezvous
Just you and Me
Drawing closer

We dine from the meal provided.
Fresh fruit, picked just that morning
For you, my beloved.
This is our sacred romance.

Shun the distractions
Come away with me.
Let My oil flood over you
In this time

Eat the meal I provided
In the presence of your enemies
Taste and see that I,
The Lord am good.

Together we hold communion
My body, broken like bread, before you
My blood, poured out like wine,
A new covenant between us.

I will take care of all of your needs, beloved.
Trust Me and enjoy the feast
As we are hidden away in this
Sacred valley.

In the fertile Valley of Shalom
We sit, two becoming one,
Dining and fellowshipping.
In our secret hide away.
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Inspired by Psalm 23


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CD Swanson 07/13/12
So beautiful. It took my breath away. Genius.

Thank you. God bless~
Shann Hall-LochmannVanBennekom 07/13/12
This is a beautiful and romantic love story between the MC and God. How blessed we are that everyone is able to partake if they are only willing.
CD Swanson 07/19/12
Congratulations! God bless~
Jody Day 07/19/12
Divinely inspired and well written. This is beautiful! Congratulations:)
Charla Diehl 07/20/12
A lovely piece. A well deserved win. Congratulations.
CD Swanson 07/26/12
Congrats! God Bless~