The Official Writing Challenge
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07/12/12
Oh my goodness! You made me cry. What an ending.
07/12/12
oh man, you made me cry too. Wow! Love this! (super creativity for the topic!)
07/13/12
And joining in on the tears...here I am! Wow - beautifully written, superbly executed and masterful in all aspects. A totally delightful yet poignant read. Thank you so much. God Bless~
07/13/12
A very poignant story, and wonderfully written.
07/16/12
Ohhhh... pass the tissues down, girls! I love how your descriptions and how Willow "talks" without saying a word.
Great writing!
07/16/12
Coping. This very gripping story depicts human agony and human strength; human frailty and human determination. Very well done.
Wow! What an intense piece. I found myself leaning forward as I devoured every word. I did wonder why little Willow never spoke -- likely the trauma of seeing Mom die. Oh how sad yet beautiful is this story. The ending is perfect. i do believe this has been pushed up to one of my all-time favorites. The idea of a picnic in a cemetery is super creative.
07/17/12
I got a lump in my throat. this is so touching...and the little girl in this picture comes straight from God. This should be the winner! God Bless...thank you
07/18/12
Wow, ditto to all the above comments. Very moving.
07/19/12
Congratulations! God bless~
07/19/12
Touching and very creative! Congratulations:)
07/19/12
Congrats, Mari!!!
07/20/12
Wow--what an emotionally stirring story. Your words painted such sweet scenes in my mind, and the ending tugged at my heart. I wanted to reach out and hug little Willow. So young and already so caring. It's no surprise this ended up on the Editor's Choice list.Congrats.
07/26/12
Congrats! God Bless~