The Official Writing Challenge
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07/13/12
Wow - what a profound commentary. Absolutely brilliant in your delivery and prolific in its message.

The part about "Church Picnic all invited" touched me and offered up a slice of hypocrisy that would feed the world! Amazing job...sheer genius.

Loved this tender cold splash of reality piece. Thank you for this sobering entry.

God bless you~
Wow this took me to a place I wasn't expecting. I guess if I'm honest and step out of my sheltered life this place is called reality. It made me stop and think and it hurt my heart. people often wonder why religions get a bad name. Your story is so powerful at so many levels. It reads like poetry in parts and it touched me deeply.