The Official Writing Challenge
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I like that first line! Nice imagery!

This is such a sweet, sad, lovely, romantic piece! The whole thing has such a peaceful feel to it. I also appreciate the hopeful way it ends.
Beautiful. This touched my heart and I loved your wrap up...the ending spoke volumes and gave us massive hope. God Bless~
This is beautiful. Though I haven't lost my husband, all three of my kids are moving onto a new phase of their lives and I'm struggling. Your words offered me comfort and hope.
Tender. Deep. Such beautiful, rich emotions. Love this so much.
Very special, touched my heart. The imagery is beautiful and the sentiment is inspiring. Nicely done.
I love the tenderness of the story and your images are so vivid. Beautiful work! Super congrats, Charla, on your Editor's Choice award!
Congrats on your Editor's Choice:)