The Official Writing Challenge
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07/12/12
I like that first line! Nice imagery!

This is such a sweet, sad, lovely, romantic piece! The whole thing has such a peaceful feel to it. I also appreciate the hopeful way it ends.
07/13/12
Beautiful. This touched my heart and I loved your wrap up...the ending spoke volumes and gave us massive hope. God Bless~
07/13/12
This is beautiful. Though I haven't lost my husband, all three of my kids are moving onto a new phase of their lives and I'm struggling. Your words offered me comfort and hope.
07/16/12
Tender. Deep. Such beautiful, rich emotions. Love this so much.
07/16/12
Very special, touched my heart. The imagery is beautiful and the sentiment is inspiring. Nicely done.
07/19/12
I love the tenderness of the story and your images are so vivid. Beautiful work! Super congrats, Charla, on your Editor's Choice award!
07/21/12
Congrats on your Editor's Choice:)