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This is a cute story. I like how you drew me in at the beginning. Reminiscing is always fun. Then when I realized it was from the POV of an ant, I smiled. (I almost did my story on that as well, but it wouldn't have compared to this) I was curious how they could have an annual picnic because I didn't think they lived very long. How delighted I was to find those interesting facts at the end so I didn't have to try and google to find my answer. Nice job!
07/13/12
Awww.I enjoyed this so much, including the fabulous info about ants you included.

Thank you for this brilliant entry...kudos for such a clever way of presenting the topic.

God bless~
07/13/12
Very amusing take.I especially liked the line when the tablecloth was shaken and their supper was deposited at their feet.
07/16/12
A fun and unique take on the subject. What says 'picnic' more than ants? I'm afraid I'll have a hard time stepping on them and spraying them after this. Might be Suzy or cousin Vinny. Nice!