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11/02/05
A serious message with the popcorn story nicely woven through it.
11/02/05
Good object lesson!
11/02/05
Oh, I like this! A complete teaching with the 'hook' of the popcorn story. And a remninder too that we can't hold on to that which stinks or hide it nearby. it's smell will make itself known.
A very good lesson. I enjoyed reading this. I think this is marketable, reminds of Joyce Meyer's devotionals. Thanks.
11/03/05
This is very nice. Great message.
11/03/05
Great message. Always good to be reminded of the abhorence of sin.
11/03/05
A wonderful devotional piece.
11/04/05
Great message, and I can relate to the popcorn thing. Get rid of the microwave -it's the only way!
:) Karen
11/05/05
Lovely devotional piece that wasn't at all 'preachy'. Well done.
11/05/05
Well thought out devotional piece. I also like that you don't preach at the end, no 'you should' but a personal application of the truth. yeggy
11/09/05
Thank you, Sally, for being the first to comment, and break the ice. And thanks, Jan for taking time to comment, too. Cassie, what a nice compliment, and one I'll cherish! Thanks, Laurie, Linda, Shari. Karen, can you believe I still have the microwave? I wouldn't give up, and after cooking a few other 'smelly' dishes in the thing, the odor finally went away. Julianne and Val, thanks for saying I wasn't overly 'preachy.' :) I really appreciate it when people take time to read, relate, and write a few words. God bless you. - Donna