The Official Writing Challenge
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What a fantastic poem- such wonderful words of truth put in a lovely, readable style. Right on topic. Great to read - and to take to heart! Thankyou
This touched my heart! I loved this beautiful and poignant entry. Thank you so much. God bless~
The imagery was good and it was understandable. - a good message with beautiful writing.
This piece was precise, to the point and right on topic. Rhythm and rhyme made this flow easily while the repeated verse sent a solid message to your readers. Good work!
I just love this piece, you really opened my eyes to the many ways I inadvertently have left my heart unguarded. I often have wondered why suddenly my thoughts can turn negative and I begin to loathe myself. Thank you so much for the insight.