The Official Writing Challenge
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06/18/12
Sweet story! The innocence of children is always adoreable! Kinda makes me think of how we need to be with those around us...when and if they come to our funeral and how they remember us. I love the story. You described the setting perfectly and could place myself under the canopy with the girls listening in on their conversation. Thank you!
06/18/12
This is great. I hope the two girls learn what Aunt Molly did.
The message came through so clearly in your delightful story. I enjoyed it, as I always do your writing.
06/20/12
Loved this! Good message in this excellent piece.Thank you. God bless~