The Official Writing Challenge
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You did a nice job with this mini-sermon. You told your opinion in a way that didn't come off as too preachy. It is difficult as humans to wrap our minds around the Spirit but he does live in all of our hearts.

You may want to break it into several small paragraphs and double space between to give the reader that white space.

While in my life I don't see him stopping the rain as much as I suddenly think of a person and am drawn to pray for them and at times to reach out and call them. It's when I find out that the moment I was thinking of that person that they were going through a hard time that I know that it was the Spirit working in both of us. It is amazing. Good job.
06/17/12
There are so many ways to recognize and "feel" the Spirit. He is there all the way...every day. Thank you for this lovely read.

God Bless~