The Official Writing Challenge
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06/15/12
I read this lovely piece twice in order to appreciate all the crafted words and the story behind them. This is filled with a mother's tender love and concern for her precious daughter. Wonderfully expressive. I expect to see this on the EC list.
06/18/12
I enjoyed this sentimental, yet reluctant release of a daughter to walk the path of her choice. We all need that kind of blessing.
06/18/12
Very nice job. I especially loved the line about "ivy eyes." Made me think of "the green eyed monster." I loved the ending too. Great job.
06/19/12
I can appreciate every word you wrote and thought this was absolutely beautiful You paint a picture with your writing and as I have two grand daughters, I will print and save this for them God Bless and this is awesome!
Your writing enchants--as always!
06/20/12
Mesmerizing and powerful.Thank you.

God bless~
This is beautiful. It really touched my he3art as my older daughter is getting married and the younger graduating from high school. This poem fits the thoughts in my mind. Congratulations on ranking 9 in Masters and 11th overall!