The Official Writing Challenge
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06/19/12
Bang on topic, and giving numerous ways of avoiding succumbing to our sinful nature. Well done!
06/19/12
You have a wonderful message. (I love your title). The words and phrases you use in these lines are my favorite, "Of hurried minutes, rushed emotions -- Dampened flames of love’s devotion..." Nice work!
06/20/12
Such a talented piece of writing contained in this "power-packed" poem. Thank you for this. I loved it.

God bless~
06/20/12
This is excellent. Strong message and very well-written. Loved it!