The Official Writing Challenge
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This is near perfection. I have a hard time hearing rhythm and finding the beat but you did a fantastic job with this.

The only thing I might even question a little is the title. Of course we who know Jesus know the ending but I wonder if because you repeated the phrase My Heart if that might have been a title for a reader who hasn't mastered the reality of eternity yet. But I could be totally wrong too. I'll admit titles aren't my strongest area.

I could see you standing at the front of the church and could feel the vibrations as your voice echoed in the sanctuary. I'm sure if I were musical it would have come off as a song in my mind. You did a splendid job with this one.
06/15/12
This was so soothing to read, so encouraging and with truths throughout. I feel better for having read it. Thank you! God bless!
06/17/12
Simply beautiful. I loved this touching poem. Thank you.

God Bless~
Congratulations on your ribbon and for placing 20 overall!
06/26/12
Raymond, sorry for the late congrats, been on vacation, but great job! Congratulations!