The Official Writing Challenge
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That's the end? I was waiting for something unexpected to happen, was dissapointed when it didn't. Good start, though! :-)
11/02/05
It's a very moody piece, that's for sure! I needed more of a back story to fully understand what was going on.
Good job at capturing an atmosphere of peril.