The Official Writing Challenge
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06/15/12
This is a great story. I really enjoyed it. It's not always easy to be obedient to God especially in hard times. But the rewards can be beyond our wildest expectations. This reminds me a bit of the show Secret millionaire. I really enjoyed this story. You did a great job of developing characters and building the conflict in under 750 words.
06/15/12
This is a great story that demonstrates what's done in secret for the Lord shall be rewarded openly. I love people like Franklin who are willing to obey God even when they don't understand. Good job! God bless!
06/17/12
Great job and a great story! Loved this. It was so good...Loved the last line. God Bless~