The Official Writing Challenge
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Wow, caught in another story that has a twist. That rarely happens to me and you did just that. As I was reading I was thinking about how inappropriate it would be for a college student to have a thing for a foster child. You did a nice job with this. I could feel my jaw dropping as I read the four year old part. Great take on the topic and lovely twist.
06/17/12
Great job! You completely surprised me with the conclusion. Nicely done. Enjoyed this. God bless~