The Official Writing Challenge
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You do a nice job of getting right to the point and you manage to tell a powerful message without coming off as sanctimonious which isn't always easy to do. Nice job.
06/15/12
You packed a powerful punch in a few words. This was so good. Thanks for sharing. God bless!
06/16/12
Good message here. I am reminded that God doesn't want our "stuff." He wants our hearts; in essence, He wants us. Unfortunately, not many people are willing to be that kind of devoted. You said it well.
06/16/12
I forgot to mention that spacing between paragraphs uniformly would make this even more enjoyable to read.
06/17/12
A fine job of bringing the message to the reader in this lovely piece. Thank you.
God Bless~
06/18/12
Nicely written and to the point. Good job!