The Official Writing Challenge
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I love this. The visual effects really flashed before my eyes. The last stanza really captured my heart.
Excellent poem conveying so much! A great reminder that Jesus, the Lamb, was, is, and will always be the Victor! Good job! God bless!
Wonderful message. It makes me aware of the problem and danger - Satan and all his ways of attack - but assured of victory by the blood of Jesus. You showed that well.
A nicely written piece cautioning us of the dangers and deception of the devil. Well done in bringing across the message through a poem!
Amen! Loved the poem and the message it brought forth. God bless~
This had a very dramatic feel to it. I could hear accompanying music building as I progressed to the end.
His blood --the truest protection of my heart. I really like that!
I love this. Especially the last stanza.
Whew, loved the last parts..."his power broke."

Great closing line
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