The Official Writing Challenge
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06/15/12
Powerful, powerful words and very true. A great poem which flows beautifully.
06/16/12
I agree with Margaret, the words flow beautifully and the message is so true. A great poem.
06/16/12
The conclusion that I am my own worst enemy spoke to my heart. Thanks for writing.
Your title is perfect for your poem of aspiration. I like how you showed the danger came from within.
06/20/12
Beautiful and touching.Thank you. God bless~
Wow! i love this. You took me where I didn't expect to go but oh how true your words are! Congratulations for ranking 16 overall!