The Official Writing Challenge
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06/09/12
I love the ending to this story, that the mother lived. Very skillfully written.
This was really fascinating. I was drawn right in from the beginning. Nice job.
06/14/12
Excellent story. I thought the use of dialogue to tell the narrative. It showed how important is it to talk to each other and share our experiences and stir one another to action.
06/15/12
This is excellent, a gripping stopry, beautifully told. Congratulations on your placing.
06/15/12
Congratulations on your placement!
06/15/12
Congrats! God bless~
06/15/12
Congrats on the EC! God Bless~