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This is sweet and gripping at the same time. i love the title too. I'm not a big technological person so it took me a minute to figure out who (or what) Siri was. I didn't see the Apple thing at the top until I was done. If my husband wasn't into that stuff I'm not sure I would have figured out. Also there was one point when I didn't realize it was Siri. Maybe if you had put it in italics.

I really enjoyed it. You packed a lot of story into 750 words. You held my attention from beginning to end. I really enjoyed this.
06/11/12
I loved this! My son-in-law has Siri and we all loved playing with his phone when he first got it. Now the newness has worn off, but I still found this a delightful read. Well written! God bless!