The Official Writing Challenge
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This was a good read. It kept my attention all the way, and I especially liked the ending. Sad to say, it is a huge problem, and you gave us a look at it from a kids' eyes.
Tremendous story addressing a real issue in our schools. Thanks for sharing. God bless!
Good story, sad but true that bullying happens and has happened for years. My son was bullied 24 years ago in high school because he was considered at geek. Now he is a cop. go figure.
This is very good. thank you for getting it out there
Oh, this is good.

The name change to "Harold" confused me and I had to go back and re-read to figure out who Harold was.

Good message here that highlights a bit problem.
I didn't check the rankings last week because I was so busy with the graduation party but congratulations on ranking 6th in level three! Happy Dance! See you can write good fiction!