The Official Writing Challenge
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06/09/12
Ha! You got me. I wasn't expecting that. I enjoyed this entry. It does show the state of our world in ways we all understand.
I so totally love this. I think you did a great job on focusing on homelessness and then added a great bit of humor. Oh to see the world through a child's eyes. This is great!
06/11/12
The ending made me laugh out loud! Good job! God bless!
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I certainly enjoyed what you did with this piece. What an engaging ending! Commendable indeed.