The Official Writing Challenge
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Wonderful pictures in this lovely poem. I felt like I was there!
06/13/12
There is something to be said for a catchy title. That said, I love this. The only thing I'd point out is OAP; I've heard that anything that stops the reader to have to figure out something out of place or not obvious is detrimental. Just a thought. Otherwise, great imagry; I was there too.
06/15/12
Margaret, this poem is outstanding. You captured the atmosphere beautifully and even the British weather felt, well - wet!!! This is a winner for sure. Well done ... from one OAP!