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06/07/12
That about sums it up...except non mention of the war on terror and homeland security invasions of innocent travelers at airports... Powerfully done. So much news in so few words. You've really done a terrific job with this piece! Thanks!
06/07/12
That sums it all up. Love the last line....one day his tears will wash away all evil, and all pain.
This is beautiful. You say so much with so few words. The last stanza gripped my heart and made me want to cry. Beautiful writing for sure.
06/15/12
I'm amazed at how much you've conveyed in this timely poem and in so few words. Sadly it's all true and makes headlines daily. I love the smooth flow of the words and as for the topic - you've hit the nail on the head!