The Official Writing Challenge
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06/07/12
This made my heart lurch in the beginning with the descriptive paragraph. How I detest violence...and when perpetrated against woman, animals and children, it makes me sick to my stomach.

An excellent job with this entry. The connection with God, and giving the "WARNING" that he was masquerading as an angel of light...gave me chills.

Just a good good story overall. With a witty and justifiable "ending."

God Bless~