The Official Writing Challenge
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10/31/05
While the emotion in this is strong, I can't find anyting to tie it to the theme of fragrance.
11/02/05
I'm not sure that I understand this, but I can see that you choose strong and evocative words. Maybe a re-write for clarification? On the other hand, sometimes poetry is just mysterious, and the reader should take out of it what is most meaningful to them...
11/02/05
Yes, very emotionally charged and reflective. Some wonderful images!