The Official Writing Challenge
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10/31/05
While the emotion in this is strong, I can't find anyting to tie it to the theme of fragrance.
11/02/05
I'm not sure that I understand this, but I can see that you choose strong and evocative words. Maybe a re-write for clarification? On the other hand, sometimes poetry is just mysterious, and the reader should take out of it what is most meaningful to them...
Yes, very emotionally charged and reflective. Some wonderful images!