The Official Writing Challenge
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05/31/12
Ah, yes, the time is over all too soon. You've done a beautiful job with this lump-in-the-throat piece. Thanks!
I like it!!! Good flow and rythym and oh so true. One question: how come poets can get by without any punctuation?
06/01/12
Ahhhh...so sweet! I raised 4 daughters, so I especially like this. Well written! Good job! God bless!
06/02/12
Sweet, touching and well written. I still have my "Barbie doll" that I look at every now and then and smile, remembering when my mom and dad gave it to me.
Thanks. God Bless~
06/04/12
This was so very sweet and really flowed so effortlessly. I really enjoyed following this little lady's journey. Very well crafted and nicely done!