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06/02/12
Oh wow. A hard question to answer, for sure! I could really feel the emotion in this piece. Nice job.
06/02/12
My heart went out to you on this emotionally charged entry. I can understand it totally. My hubby's mom passed away suddenly, and we live four hours away. We had two days to clean out her "over packed apartment." Mourning is tough enough, but having that Herculean and arduous task is daunting.

Thanks for sharing your life with us. God Bless~
06/02/12
This touched my heart, as I have wondered the same things at times. Each thought shows the vulnerability that we need to endure, for only allowing the questions to have their sway, can the real peace enter and give the confidence that our best was good enough.
06/04/12
This is so sad. Looking to the past with regrets is hard. Must be why God said to keep pressing on. Thank you for sharing. Many will relate to this.
Hi -

This is indeed a moving piece. Thank you for the deep emotion that you so well expressed.

Please note:

- In the first paragraph - "did..." should be "Did..."
I should have clarified...

In the first paragraph:

The FIRST entry of "did" should be capitalized as it is the beginning of your statement.
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