The Official Writing Challenge
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There's a lot of truths for a lot of people in this well crafted poem. Lots of us, especially me, crash on regardless until our own 'darkening clouds of care,'send us running home to Him. And thankfully we are always welcome.

I like the way you take us smoothly from childhood simplicity through to adulthood with it's cares and worries.

On the whole I think this is a lovely poem and fits the topic well!

Beautifully done. Your poetry was meaningful and a smooth flow. Nicely done.
God Bless~
He loved me first and He'll never stop loving. Very nice poem.
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