The Official Writing Challenge
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06/01/12
You show well the pain and questions that come from deep and longterm hurt. I am so glad God hears those kinds of cries, and can always handle our questions and heal our hearts when we let Him. Good job on this.
06/01/12
Wow! First off, if this is a true story, welcome fellow Arizonan! I, too, live in the hot desert of Arizona. (112 degrees in Phoenix today) Secondly, I had to really look at this to make sure I didn't write it because I have also had those raging conversations with God. Isn't it precious how He loves and is okay when we vent and ask Him questions? This was well written. God bless!
06/02/12
Powerful, emotional and intense entry. The conversation with God was riveting. I felt the MC's pain and anguish.

God bless~
06/04/12
This was very intense, moving, powerful, and felt very ... real! I could feel the despair of the MC and the struggle to make sense of life. This was very well written and you did a wonderful job of showing and painting vivid word picture. Great job!
Congratulations for ranking 14th in level 3!