The Official Writing Challenge
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06/01/12
Point well shown. There are a lot of fence runners who won't turn loose of their so-called "fun." I like your characters. The names add to the interest. Good job on a sad subject.
06/02/12
Tihs was so clever and fresh...What an imaginative way to bring across such an important message. Great job! God Bless~
06/04/12
So many rich nuggets of truth and impactful wisdom in this piece. The whole analogy of the two worlds being separated by a fence and then making sure one doesn't sit on it was brilliant! This flowed very well and kept me engaged to the end. Well done!
Hi -

What an exceptional weave of a vital message! This is superb!

Thank you.
Congratulations for ranking 13th in level 3!