The Official Writing Challenge
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06/01/12
Interesting way of telling a story that is within a story. It was clever the way you showed the processing of the MC's mind as she is watching the show unfold. I think if there had been carriage returns (spaces) after each paragraph it may have been easier to read. But the flow itself was good and I enjoyed the MC's resolve at the end. Nice work!
06/01/12
Haha...you got me at the end. I thought for sure the MC knew the answer. And I loved all the thoughts going to the circumstances the MC had been through, then coming back to the quiz show. Good job. God bless!
06/03/12
I like the message here, and it is well written. It has a lot of thought in it of the things which are really important. You did show it well.
06/07/12
Congrats! God Bless~
06/07/12
Congratulations Christine! Great job! God bless!
Congratulations for your ribbon and for ranking 19th overall!