The Official Writing Challenge
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06/01/12
Nice story! I liked the opening line ... really catches your attention. Then the story flows easily and keeps it. I actually liked that it ended with simply her question and that you didn't try to resolve it in the 750 word limit. I think the way it is presents an honest and realistic approach to what so many go through, especially many who were raised in the church. Well done!
06/01/12
This is a great read for anyone who has ever been hurt or disillusioned by the church or Christians. (which is probably most of us) But when all is said and done, Jesus came to die for all of us. You made some great points. Good job! God bless!
Hi -

Thank you for this provocative piece. Indeed there is much to ponder.

Isn't it wonderful that GOD never fails? When all else fails, GOD never does.

Please note:

- Paragraph that begins, "As usual..." - "niggling at here" should be "niggling at her."

I didn't know what "niggling" meant. Thank you for teaching me a new word.

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