The Official Writing Challenge
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My goodness, what a sweet, wonderful, and lovely story! This was so heart warming on so many levels. From the overall tone of genuine respect this family has for its patriarch to the loving renuion of Malcolm and Trudy, ... this touches the heart in so many ways. Simply ... a beautiful piece of writing. Thank you!
This is fun and uplifting without being sticky sweet, if you know what I mean. Great entry.
Awww. So sweet. I wanted more. It needs to be a mini-series. Thanks for this lovely and touching entry.
God bless~
This makes me want to meet Malcom myself! This a great story of hope - it's not all over yet! Truly a fun read.
I just love this, and especially Malcolm. I love his line: This old locomotive still has steam in his engine. What a character! Reminds of my visit with mom in the nursing home this week. She has met a "fella" and that makes her happy. Cute story. God bless!
Such a fun article to read. Thanks for sharing! Blessings...
Throughout your entire entry, I was wondering when you would reveal the "question" that was to be on target for this week's entries. You did an excellent job in a so matter-of-fact manner of introducing Trudy to your audience and then putting nothing further about her until the end of the story. I like stories like this; they warm my heart. You did an excellent job of presenting Malcolm's story and the added twist at the end was just a little icing on the cake.