The Official Writing Challenge
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05/31/12
This was SO good! I loved the pace it maintained and the clever play with words that drove home each point. This was such a wonderful creative work that blessed me greatly!
05/31/12
Succint, to the point, and overwhelmingly accurate.
Great job. Thanks.
God bless~
06/01/12
This is so good. I especially love the parts about America. Thanks for reminding us of our need to pray for America. You did a great job. God bless!
I enjoyed the poetic rhythm of this piece. A very intriguing poem about a very sobering topic. I like the strong finish at the hill of Calvary.

The punctuation is off, but I think it fits the style of this piece. Nicely done!






This is beautiful. I so could relate to the MC. We do need to do more questioning because hard times are coming. Poems such as this will inspire many to ask the right question. I'm sure of it,
06/07/12
Excellent take on the subject matter at hand. Yes, we MUST continue to pray for America. I appreciate the words of your poem. They have caused this reader to do some thinking about just where America stands. This is a beautifully-written poem. Thank you for your entry.
06/07/12
Congrats! God Bless~
06/07/12
Congratulations on your well deserved 1st place! God bless!
Congratulations for your ribbon and for ranking 16 overall!